The "Play"
This play met the length requirement, but beyond that it is a piece of Fallout (a post-apocalyptic video game) fan-fiction that started out with promise and ambition, and ended with me falling asleep on my my keyboard. If you want a good play to get your brain working, don't read mine. However, if you do read it, have a kind soul and don't judge my poor excuse of art. :)
Oats,
ReplyDeleteI don't know why you are so hard on yourself because it was better than you made it out to be. You took it in a very imaginative direction that (most likely) nobody else in our class would have thought of. Since you are currently sitting right next to me I've already expressed how I feel about it to you, but for the sake of doing this assignment I will restate those thoughts. I think that the characters could have had clearer voices, and I can tell where you fell asleep. As you have said multiple times, it had so much potential, but because of the time constraint, you were limited. Despite how bad you think it was, I enjoyed reading it!
Thank Tay
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